Sunday, December 9, 2012

Chapter 3 Spoilers

As you know, Hayden and I are fledgling authors and I have personally promised short snippets of our story to keep you interested. Of course, I have no idea if Hayden will agree to it, but I'll post part of our Chapter 3 from our book, Unmasked. Enjoy!




            The vast expanse of the Atlantic Ocean stretched all around Kyden as a sense of diminutiveness overwhelmed his mixture of emotions, but eventually it gave way to exhaustion. The rhythmic slapping of waves onto the boat lulled Kyden into sleep despite the determined goal that he had to stay awake through out the whole journey. He was going out into the modern urban world instead of staying in the comfortable rural village in Ireland, which he considered a great adventure and a new chapter in his life.  His grandfather had told him of the Prophecy that he had to follow, which pertained to him; after all, was it not him with immense, but not perfect, self-control from day one? Yawning, he stumbled onto a chair and closed his dark eyes.
            Several hours later, Kyden woke to loud shouts of excitement and found himself curled up in a cushioned lounge chair on the boat deck with his knapsack as a covering. Then, muttering curses, he realized he had given in to his inner persuasion and fell asleep.  He looked around to see groups of tourists pressed against the railings, chattering and pointing as if something had caught their eyes.
            “Regardez-la! C'est le city! ” a tourist yelled in French with excitement. The city? Kyden sat up and looked around. Indeed, they were near the city.  Even this far away, Kyden could feel the Big Apple in him as he saw the towering buildings made famous in the postcard skylines, heard the continuous sound of car honks and smelled the gasoline floating in the air. Kyden did not know whether to be amazed at what humans had created or to be disgusted with their decision to destroy nature for cities like these.
            Kyden started when they passed a towering lady made of rusting iron. The crown on her head inclined Kyden to believe she was royalty.  The lady was also holding a torch and a book. Kyden wondered if there were possibilities that any Royalty still lived in America. Last time he had actually listened to his history lessons were before his involvement in the Prophecy. Kyden sighed as he remembered his home in Ireland. The quaint, little village of his by the sea, where he had been comfortable but eager to be part of urban society, pierced his memory in a way Kyden never thought it would.
            With his thoughts deeply wrapped around his home, Kyden had not realized all the tourists had returned to their cabins to get ready for docking. Immersed in his thoughts of home, he stared off back towards the horizon in which the ship had arrived from.
            “Sir,” someone woke him from his reminiscing. “The boat has docked and you’re the last on deck. We have to ask you to leave since the crew has to prepare for the next trip.”
            “Oh, my profound apologies, sir,” Kyden replied in his Irish lilt as he turned away from the railing and went to pick up his coarse knapsack which contained his toiletries, his brand new Irish passport, a set of clothes, the luck charms his younger brother gave him, a necklace with a badly carved fireball and the first item Kyden had ever burned, some Euros and the address he was to go to in case he missed the person that was supposed to pick him up.
            He walked off the plank onto the wooden pier; Kyden looked around amidst the crowd that was still half-gathered around. As he tried to leave the pier, a man with a flat stick stopped him.
            “Hey, you cannot leave until I see your passport and check that you are not bringing anything illegal into America,” the man said threateningly in a strong Middle Eastern accent. He gestured for Kyden to put his backpack on a rubber, black table.
            Kyden complied and put his knapsack onto the table that suddenly rolled it through a big box, “Wait! That’s my sack---”
            “Don’t worry about your backpack sonny, we’re just checking it,” another man in a blue uniform and belt said kindly. “If you would, put anything with metal in here and proceed through the metal detector.”
            Kyden looked at the white doorframe in front of him and made a face. Why would humans need metal detectors? Kyden wondered, after all, they managed to bend metal themselves.  He shrugged, disconcerted, and took off his jacket with many metal zippers and put his wallet into another box that rolled after his backpack.
            As he walked through the white doorframe, the red light above it started to shine and rotate as an irritatingly loud shriek pierced the air.
            “Put your hands up!” the flat stick man shouted with a glare. He then proceeded to pat Kyden before he found the source of all the trouble: the metal clasp and hook of Kyden’s necklace. The man gave his last glower at Kyden and swept him readily off to the next station, the lady who dealt with passports.
            “Hello,” the lady said in a monotone voice. “Please show your passport.”
            Kyden dug around his backpack before coming up with his blue VISA passport that he had gotten a month before. The lady checked the photo on it before stamping his VISA with a giant red seal. Kyden stared at the words with disbelief as the idea of being in America finally impacted him.
            “Next!” she shouted as Kyden, pulled out of fantasy, was pushed past the booth into the actual waiting area. There were masses of people wandering around. His grandfather had not told him who the person picking him up was. So Kyden wandered around the exit aimlessly for a while before he got tired and sat down in a seat near the automatic doors, hoping the person would recognize him.



Well, that was our preview.  I hoped you enjoyed and if there's anything unsatisfying, message us, leave a comment or, better yet, talk to us in person and we'll signing something for you! You never know when that might come in handy. ;)

-Azalea

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